Unfold the eyes

It's not hard to understand.

Must the tree have legs

For it to stand?

Must the ocean have hands

For it to touch the sand?

Must the plant have a brain

For it to grow on land?

And must a creator be seen

For us to understand? 

Reviews

[Stephen]

Perfect! What a beautiful poem I read in a day! It again refreshes my mind .. so much mystery`s hidden behind your beautiful words .. so much emotions, truth, misery & the peace reflecting through the words. Beautiful! I simply loved reading this short--write! Well written!

[Mirna]

thank you so much! I'm sorry I'm replying late, I was busy with exams, but honestly thank you:)

[yashmita13]

wow!!!!!!!!!!...amazing work.

[Mirna]

thank you!! :)

[Thomas Skahill]

I really like your poetry, I'd like to see you keep writing it.

[Mirna]

Thank youu!! I usually write stories, but I'll also like to write more poetry, thank you for the comment xx

[New Theory]

I believe in it the poem is a beautiful ode to the all mighty , the magic of believing.

[Mirna]

thank you for your commenttttt :) xx

[New Theory]

you are welcome :)

[Roger Turgeon]

Gave me something to think about... but then thinking might be the cause of not understanding

[Mirna]

Haha yes that is true :) but perhaps just thinking about things is better than understanding them, if we can even understand them at all.
thanks for the comment x

[junaid altaf]

very simple but full of mystery
well versed

[Mirna]

thank you for the comment it means a lot to me :) xx

[junaid altaf]

a very lucid composition
and very philosophical

[Mirna]

Thank you!! xx

[junaid altaf]

your welcome

[Pól]

No.
Next question!
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[Lilly]

This is great!
It's simple, but the use of questions is really so effective here.
A thought-provoking, powerful and beautiful piece
I really enjoyed this

[Mirna]

Thank you so much :) xxx

[T]

Although we cannot see the roots we know they are there. I think that concept applies to the others as well. Life goes on and unseen forces are at work. Things grow when we are not looking, Waves go on although no force is seen pushing them. I suppose we could ask the question how does one maintain hope while things are crumbling around them too. I think this is a well thought out concept.

[Mirna]

this is such a lovely review. thank you so much for stopping by :) i really appreciate it :)