The cloud and the puppet

None needed,title tells it all

There was a puppet who was sad and lonely.His eyes were diamonds and his heart was a Ruby.Everyone wanted him for his jewels,they never saw his soul or cared what he said.One day on a bright sunny day a pink cloud came along.The puppet was crying tears of gold so the cloud came down to try to cheer him. so the cloud turned herself into a beautiful puppet and named herself marsilla.Marsilla cheered up the puppet. Her tears were made of sand and her eyes of blue buttons.but her heart,her heart was real. A true beating heart.The puppet yearned to have one like hers but marsilla said only when you love enough.the puppet replied I love you enough.but not enough she said.Marsilla disapears one night slowly turning into a cloud.She rained upoun a lake unleashing her sadness. THE fish below could feel it so they cried with her overflowing the river.The puppet looked for marsilla during the flood.He cried when he couldn't find.He added his tears and found he couldn't cry diamonds anymore.So he put his hand on his chest and felt a steady warm beat and everything started to calm down.The world grew lighter around him.The cloud had it's pinkness back and looked down at the puppet.She came down slowly as the puppet grew scared.I am marsilla said the cloud.The puppet cried once again as a cool wind blew the cloud a little.I love you no less If your a cloud or a puppet he said.The cloud turned brighter pink and turned into marsilla for a little while.They danced around river and spread love to nature all around them.The whole world seemed content and happy now.The puppet didn't have to worry anymore.

Author's Note

Ignore grammer problems please,what do you think?

Reviews

[TheBubbleManiac]

This is such a powerful love story. I love that you made these not people, but puppets. How the puppet yearns for a true beating heart is wonderful. I love how this also symbolizes life now. How people only want what others have, instead of truly just loving them for who they are. Wonderful piece and I hope to read more that is to come!