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The real person you shld spend the rest of your life with...the one

When you feel like you are being pushed from behind, When you are ready to give up everything only to meet that person, When you are ready to wait all day only to meet that person for few seconds...or just watch while she passes by, When only the feeling of her presence will clear off all your worries and sadness, When nothing heard, said or seen really affect the way you feel. When you don't choose to feel that way about her When you don't care what she looks like physically... When her thoughts keeps coming even when you don’t wish for...when thinking about her is something you cannot control. When you can tell how she feels about you... when you can express the reasons for her actions... when you truly understand her That’s who you are truly in-Love With... And she is SOMEOONE you should call THE ONE. Someone truly worth keeping!!! Someone you kneel in front of with a ring in your hands... On top of the mountain when the sun is setting, When the cool breeze is flowing side by side, When the weather is right. Someone who deserve at that perfect Moment hear you say " I can’t promise you a palace, am not a perfect person to live with, I may not afford A diamond Ring. if Love really matters then, I undoubtedly Love you more than anything in this world and you Complete me. I want you to be my last First Love. Aisha, MARRY ME!"

Author's Note

I hope you like it...and I expect a honest review and possible corrections.

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Good writing but I think I might have enjoyed it more if it were formatted into a poem rather than like a prose piece. It feels much more daunting reading a piece like this if it is in paragraph form.

[Muhammad M. Ibrahim]

thanks for reading...and the priceless corrections.