What must I say?

my friend needs help.

If I see her in hate

Tearing endlessly with mislaid love

 

Tell me

What must I think?

When her heart was signed,

Sealed and delivered

To a man who missed her body

And misses nobody

 

 

What must I say?

When her heart is shielded by empty promises

And sheltered by the wings of disappointments

 

What must I do?

When I see her lost

And she can not breathe inside her mind

What must I whisper to her clattering ears?

That will dissolve the spell of love away

 

I am lost in solid words

Found in mess

Help.

Reviews

[André-J-Franklin]

This is a great poem. I editing alot of my work now so ....i looking at mislaid it looks weird in the sentences..wouldn't it be mislead or misled. I could be wrong.

[Marie]

This poem makes one question. What can one say? Sometimes there's nothing.

[The White Wolf]

This is a very heartfelt plea, my friend. I think we have all found ourself in this situation with a friend. The pain we feel, the worry, it is all very real. We aim to help them but are in need of emotional support ourselves. Very good write!