Lost in crowd

Lost in crowd

A Poem by Mira
"

A broken heart

"
It is hard to explain

Since I got over you,

These feelings

Which have washed over me.

I came away

Since you wont accept me.

But I can hear

Your voice

See your face

See you walk away

With someone else.

I know you are not here

But still I cannot

Get over

How I want you.

© 2021 Mira


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Amazing one Mira... Could feel it in every word.. Loved it...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mira

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Unrequited love hurts. Takes time to get over, but one day some one else will sweep you off your feet. It happens. You aren't over this one yet by a long way. Felt the emotion in this one Mira.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mira

3 Years Ago

Yeah, still not over but trying.
Thank you for the review.
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

You are welcome poet.

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