True Love or True Friends

True Love and True Friends

All so difficult to comprehend

Is one more importand than the other

or does one have a specail bond more than one another

Is it really that hard to see

Or our my eyes just blind to me

Does one deserve more

and leave the other one poor

Or do they deserve equal share

I'm not sure because I know now

That they all start some how

They all are specail

But they could end like that

 

Reviews

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

probably should read
'or does one have a special bond more than another'
and leave out the second use of 'one'

should read 'or ARE my eyes etc, instead of 'our'


a good poem. i'll get to more reviews of your stuff in time. all the best. daniel

[Wicahpi]

SWEET!

[Keri]

You cant have one without the other. Loved the poem it is vary well writen thank you for sharing.

[lots fo love ♥]

rachel rose! again1 that iz sooooooooooooooooooo true!

[jessie]

nice write. i think both are equally important. many people think love is better than friendship but i theink they are exactly equal. very wonderful it makes you really think.