feathers

It feels like it was just yesterday

when i stepped into the forbiddin forest

the pond was crystal clear

I bent down to take a drink

when i saw what it  held

A perfect reflection of  a man

I stood up real quite like i was trying not to scare a deer

we stared at each other with the same crystal blue eyes

then smiles filled our faces and we were off

running around the trees laughing

and feeling as light as a feather

and that is when our lips grazed making me fly away

Reviews

[Placenta]

i love the imagery in this, but heres a suggestion- a little bit more punctuation would be nice, making it easier to read. and forbidden isnt spelled "forbiden" lol. i tend to make terrible mistakes like that all the time. keep writing

[Crazy Cat Man]

cute :D

[lots fo love ♥]

did you get this from the book i was reading? haha jk i loved it