My home

It started tingling in my toes

and grew up my spine and shook me around

I couldn't help it but my world was turned around by my love for you

All I want to do is touch your soft hand and be wrapped in your sweet rapture

 over and over again

but you are holding me back

I'm not even a shadow at afternoon's sun

You don't know but I'm always entraced by your bright blue eyes and sweet smell of radiance

You twirl me in circles of confusion

and i always end up falling at your feet

For some reason i'm now in your feeling

and held in your gaze as your mind seeks for my beauty

I know this is what I've always wanted but is it true love

is our sweet rapture entertwined

As our lips touch softly i know it is true

your have been my long seeking home and now i'm excatley where i've always wanted to stay

Reviews

[lots fo love ♥]

i agree wit david dover fougerat

[17thWhitePrince]

very nice ... I loved it a lot ... the only thing I would change is this : "now i may rest at your chest" ... I think it might be more appropiate to put something like "now i am exactly where i've always wanted to stay"
... something like that ending with the word "stay" ... yeahh ... I think that might work ... everything else is really really good ... you are so very talented indeed :) :D