The flying desire

Something you want you can't always touch

It can be anything

For me it is a feeling that I achieve at I place

It is my promise land

I wish to live in a place where I feel fit

Surrounded by nature as it was made to be

Open skys and I can put on my wings and fly away

The feeling to fly would be wordless

I could gaze upon the eagles high but they'll soar below my height

I could fly to the purple mountains quick

With a little loop the loop oh my

Go through the clouds fly over the rainbow

The bird's point of view is outstanding

Flying up high would give me a feeling that my heart pleads

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Yes, to fly, to soar above the clouds. Loved this piece.

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

unfortunately, the only time most of us get to fly (apart from aeroplanes, helicopters, gliders etc) is in our dreams. but your poem, I feel, evokes the hidden hearts desires in many of us to taste what only the eagles who soars the heights of heaven taste, alongside those of their kindred bird-kind. perhaps in an eternal life of dreams coming true, you may taste such realities - i hope you do one day, and it is everything and more you hoped for. a good poem, well expressed, that many people can relate to. i liked it. well done

[Wicahpi]

Nicely done Rachel!! I love flying dreams!! Those were always my favorite. :-)

[Don Coorough]

These are all such beautiful sensations and ideas. Very lovely poem!

[bluessadmood]

oh its when you are feeling so serene,and heart full of love and hope,and content,feeling high from much emotions,and dreams run wild ,so much images come to mind that you feel so light, light like bird flying high and free ,free as the wind,free as your soul and its a great feeling,wonderful

[lots fo love ♥]

that was very very good i loved it so much

[Angel's Lady]

I could gaze upon the eagles high but they'll soar below my height
I could fly to the purple mountains quick

The flying desire is the perfect title. Wonderfully written! Great job.