Larchkit and Hollykit

Larchkit and Hollykit

You were so tiny when you were loss

The starving was just to much

The hunger took you in a clutch

It finally released when it stopped your hearts beat

The prey just wouldn't run

So your mouths just couldn't feed your stomachs

Your mother couldn't bear to lose

And your brother never got to train with you two

You died in the heart of the forest

but you look upon the lake and hope that the prey runs to fill every kits belly

Author's Note

working on it

Reviews

[Emily Elizabeth]

This is brilliant!
There are a few typos, but everything else was perfect!

[Tuff Stuff]

Aghhh!
Loved it!