Dream world

The light turns off behind you as footsteps join you in a different world

It holds the code the combination to the head

as it holds Mystic powers

The chaos of this world is all around

It shows you things of the future or unravel mysteries of the past

It holds a code that you have the combanation to deep in your head

It mystic power to save the future or deepen the truth

Are right in the pocket of your sleep as things are shone

Many people do many things with it write stories, save kingdoms or find inspiration for new stories

Reviews

[Don Coorough]

"The light turns off behind you as footsteps join you in a different world"

what a great opening line!

"The chaos of this world is all around" - this is another excellent line!

You're really letting loose with what lies inside you! Keep writing! - EllisD

[bluessadmood]

and i was there ,i saw the past ,i imaged my future,i told the world strange stories ,and they were glad ,i see the chaos all around me but i tell of great world going smoothly around only in my head and they are happy and listen to more and more ,they called me the dreamer ,some did laugh a lot ,some made jokes but lots but lots took in what i said and so happy they were ,told me how they could join in my world ,and i told them follow me,i will show you wonder ,forget this world i will buy us dreams and spread it all ,all around ,you will have joy,you will know nothing but happiness ,no miser ,not any more ,just follow me are the dreamer ,its our world leave all the mess for those who believe we are no more than a joke ,and i tell better a joke and a laugh than your real world of blood and killings all around ,ok now who is laughing ,you got my point ,for..i know ,i know

[Wicahpi]

"It holds a code that you have the (combanation) to deep in your head..." ~ (combination)

(It) mystic power to save the future or deepen the truth ~ (It's)

Are right in the pocket of your sleep as things are shone

(Many people do many things (with it ) write stories, save kingdoms or find the right path) ~ 'Many people do many things (within) dreams; write stories, save kingdoms or find (inspiration) for (new) stories.'
**hope you don't mind those suggestions.

Dreaming is the best part of the day! Praises to you...good job!!

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

A master of Dreams is the 'Sandman'. Morpheus is one of the 7 endless. Created by Neil Gaiman and featured in the comic 'The Sandman' from DC's Vertigo Comics, Morpheus is the master of the Dream World. Funnily enough, Morpheus, even though he was of the endless, died and was replaced by a new dream master called 'Daniel'.

In the book of Daniel, Old Testament book number 27, Daniel is given by God the gift of interpreting 'dreams and visions'. This is probably why Neil Gaimain named the second Sandman 'Daniel'.

What is the purpose of dreams? Why do we have them? Were do they come from? Is there a mysterious 'Sandman' of the 'Endless' who pervades our heart, offering up to us new treasures each and every night?

Dreams, I feel, are often cryptic visions of our former lives in the heart and mind of God - when we were spiritual beings in a type of heaven were all the souls of angels and men are initially formed. This is a dreamworld were we first encounter other souls, especially those we come to know in this life. I believe that God first brought us to life in his spiritual heart - in the heart of paradise - and that, when our firstlife was complete in the lessons of youth and love we all needed - God brought us to life on 'EARTH" to learn the hard lessons of the 'REAL WORLD' life. This life on earth is a place in which we are TESTED to see just what we are really made of - and how good or bad we really are. The dreams we are given are of past life, teaching us those truths and ideals we once held to as a judgement, in a sense, of what we have become. But of course, the future is in our dreams as well. Hidden fantasies of life eternal before us are pervaded into our hearts in our slumber, as God etches into our beings those dreams and desires and longings each and everyone of us has to find fulfilment, perfect love, and peace, and all the other desires of 'Glory' for our selves - our loved ones - and our descendants.

Your portrait of dreams is a wonderful cascade of ideas, all in the distinctive poetical style which I have come to know in you - and of which I am becoming quite a fan of.

A really excellent work - keep it up.


Daniel

[Silver_Moon]

I like this... I sometimes go there in my sleep... :)
very creative... :D

[Meridian]

I like this. Kind of eerie twilight... the words "save kingdoms" were so pleasantly unexpected as what some choose to do with their dreams... very nice imagery.

Good write!

[Adam]

I like to live in a dream world, it's where my best stuff comes from. Excellent work.

[lots fo love ♥]

that is so wonderful. i loved it one of the best poems you ever wrote. by the way i like typing on your keyboard. it is so smooth

[Frankie Warman]

O.O wow thats beautiful.