Nature's life

Meadow gleams in the sunlight

The rainbow spreads its blanket of flowers

Its painted mountains in the back outlined in sun

Tumbling water from the mountain created a silver lining across the rolling hills

The sun sleeps beneath the meadow as it sets behind the mountains

Dark has come but is dazed by the colored lights hight in the sky

As the sun rises once again animals sing their morning tunes

 

Reviews

[Arsenic]

This poem describes nature in a way that is both real and vivid. It paints the picture of a perfect free society, untouched and unharmed by human hands. It truly shows natures perfection and harmony as well as its life. Well done.

~Arsenic

[Abigail Alliah]

The beauty of the perfection of nature is very well-described.
I enjoyed it.
It made me think 'happy place', and indeed it may be for you and many others.
Serene, wonderful.

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

This poem is a natural beauty.

[Evil_Angel]

Aw I love this. its a very happy and calm poem, I like it opposed to whiny depressing poems haha. Great job. :)

[Silver_Moon]

very scenic... love it...
can almost see the colors the sun and the rainbow made... :)
beautiful piece. :D

[Carole]

Beautiful imagery you have used here through out the piece. You have woven a enamoring tapestry with each word...

[Blue Sky]

Ahh, you've not only captured that moment
of the sacred risings, animals sing their morning tunes,
you've brought out a picture of nature at its finest pen
and I really thought you did a wonderful job to display
that moment with these wonderful choice of words
lines flow ambiently and smoooth, bringing the picture alive/so vivid
very nicely done, awesome piece!!!

[Emza S]

That's a really good poem. I love nature. I think that it's very detailed, and descriptive. Nice job!

[Mintwhiskers]

i think it is cool

[lots fo love ♥]

loved it so much!