Endless wonderland

A poem describing what horses and horse lovers dream of

There is a place where the only thing in the dirt is a hoof print next to a footprint.
A land where horses run forever on endless fields.
A wonderland that holds a secret,
A secret for bonding love and discovering faith from horse beats to human beats.
All fun and games,
No tears shed, no horses die.
All beliefs and dreams kept and followed.
A place in which all horses and humans dream to explore.
Rolling hills, snowy mountains, painted sunsets.
A tranquil silence, beckoning for a run with a friend.
A place where when night falls there's not a fear, because a trusting mate is always near.
Winding trails to journey on forever,
No promises shattered, no miserable misfortunes.
Just a wonder haven for all horse lovers and horses.

Author's Note

Please criticize my writing

Reviews

[Abigail Alliah]

I love the fantasy.
We all wish for a place like that with our own descriptions, and yours is portrayed elegantly.
Good job.

[Tuff Stuff]

Mint Whiskers is WONDERFUL!

[ABBY]

lol i really really really loved that one. i dont like horuses because i think they smell soooooooooooooooooo bad......... but thats just my opinoun. good poem though...................................... this one really makes me think......evan though what it made me think about it still made me think and thats the only thing thats important