WHY ARE YOU JUST WATCHING?!

WHY ARE YOU JUST WATCHING?! PEOPLE ARE OUT THERE!
VICTIMS OF BULLYING! I WONDER IF YOU CARE, CHILDREN,
TEENS EVEN ADULTS ARE SCARED TO GO TO WORK, SCHOOL
BECAUSE OF WHAT THE IGNORANT ONES HAVE DONE TO THEM!
STOP the excuse of "I don't know how to help" walk over and
do something. Pull them away, quit letting others back people
into walls. Even though the bullies are doing the worst damage
you're part of the causing damage to because you stood and
watched. Fight with them to stop it, when you fight the less
damage there will be. So many people die because of ones
who don't help. SO WHY ARE YOU JUST WATCHING?! HELP THEM!

Author's Note

i know its harsh but i really wanted to get a poem like this out there
i know there are alot of victims of bullying that's why i wrote this poem
let me know what you think

Reviews

[Nessa]

Sis.. this poem is amazing. I have been bullied since second grade and there are many times I have tried to commit suicide. Its sick for people to think they can hurt another beccause their lives suck.. well that person that SAYS their life sucks is making the OTHER persons life suk! So all you dbag bullies out there... THINK ABOUT WHAT YOUR DOING!!!!!!!!!

[Imara]

I'm glad to see a poem about helping the bullied and not about being bullied. It's true people need to help one another.
Now your form, in my opinion, could use some work. I think adding more line and breaking it up would help. Read it out loud to yourself, I think that will help :) Great Job.

[minnie:)]

thanks for the advice, ill try to get to it :)