The Lovely Little Fire Breather

The Lovely Little Fire Breather

A Poem by Mia M.
"

Why you should never be any type of therapist.

"

See?

How she c***s her head?

As if listening

To music

Or torture

Or the screams

Of a thousand souls damned

Their life flits out, her life flits in

Replacing the life they have lost

Her every day a battle

Her life they steal, her thoughts congeal

Yet still her face is ethereal

Her placid smile

Not worth the while

As her life drips out her veins

Nothing she does

Can stop the pains

So why would she complain?

© 2012 Mia M.


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I think you need to change your "about me" because I think you are far better a poet than you think.
"Her placid smile
Not worth the while"
I’m the furthest thing from a poetry expert. I love poetry and I enjoy reading it and I thought this was great. A lot of the people who enjoy poetry are just like me. Not experts but love to enjoy it. So even though I’m not a pro, I hope you believe me when I say this is great.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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