Why Bother?

Why Bother?

A Poem by Mia M.
"

It's true.

"

Don’t hope

Why bother?

You’d get hurt

It spins you round

F***s you up

Why bother

This world is s**t

Don’t expect

Why bother

The unreachable

Will never get closer

It only leads to hurt

Why bother

This world is s**t

© 2012 Mia M.


Author's Note

Mia M.
Again,this isn't my best work.

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Not bad, I think the phrase "why bother" may be too overused. You could leave only the first and last ones and delete the rest and I think that would help the flow better.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Mia M.

12 Years Ago

Thanks again! i was trying to give it more of a structure,but i wasn't sure if it worked or not.

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