Glow

Glow

A Poem by Mia M.

Stop.

Stare.

Her glazed eyes

Glow from within.

Illuminated

By the sadness.

The loss of the life.

The only light left

Is the knowledge.

People tell her she will survive.

This is true.

But what good is just surviving?

For life without love is truly lost.

She does not shine with the knowledge that she will survive.

She glows

From the knowledge

She will have happiness

While the others suffer.

© 2012 Mia M.


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Mia
"For life without love is truly lost" Wow, that’s powerful! I like the way it flows. It’s quite sadistic..
"She glows
For the knowledge
She will have happiness
While the others suffer."
And weirdly enough I like that!


Posted 12 Years Ago


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Mia M.

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much!

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