Birds Song

Woke up this morning I opened my door

Walked for a while to greet a new day

Seemed so quiet usually is at this time

Noticing mornings lately getting brighter

I came upon a woodland with an abundance of trees

The wind whistled through them it sounded eerie

When out of nowhere came this heart rendering sound

It was so crisp and so clear all other sound drowned

Sound echoed off trees with no hope of tracing

I looked on the ground and among every treetop

But nowhere could i find where it hailed from
As I walked on I felt my heart slowly racing

I feel I'm closer now than ever before

the beautiful sound is much crisper than before

I stop and take heed feel like one wrong step is all

It will take for this enchanting song to cease

In front of me stands the tallest of trees

Its top reaches up as far as my eyes can see

It's there that I see the owner of this magical chorus

It's the Bird with the most imaginative of versus

I sit there for hours but in reality bare minutes

Gazing in awe wondering who created all of this

To be enjoyed by all but few stop to listen

It's too often exploited and not easily comprehended

It sings this melody a regular occurrence

I assume to let all know why all was created

I speak of the Blackbird not the most extravagant in colour

Only distinguished by the dull or bright yellow

It leaves when song ends and without me knowing

Will it be the last song I'll hear with such feeling

I continue my journey now filled with more meaning 

To the Blackbird I thank you for making my morning

Reviews

[SheaRyhai]

very nice free style. some of the words felt a bit pushed together, some punctuation could easily fix that though. Every now and then the lines end in rhymes but they are completely natural in this poem.

"Only distinguished by the dull or bright yellow" - is it one or the other? I would imagine yellow to be bright.

I love, again, how you paint the picture for us with your words. The woods your walking in, the breeze, the noise, the sighting of this bird and its singing. Enjoyed the read.

[Imane]

I liked it so much ! it's simple , meaningful and the subject is awesome too :) Keep up sis ^^

[Tom]

A super creative poem with sublime detailed imagery, yes indeed the little common blackbird sings one of the most beautiful songs and would uplift the heart of any soul!

An inspiring write, expressed so exquisitely !

[minisla]

My favorite songbird. Thanks Tom

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This poem is amazing. I like how you describe the song that the blackbird was sounding. I enjoyed this poem.
100/100

[Between the grey]

enjoyed this write so much, really like your last line, that is wonderful.