I wish I knew

I wish I knew

A Poem by Jimmy Seaman
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See if you can guss what its about.

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I wish I knew,
why it was me.

I wish I knew,
what I did
to deserve this.

I am a wreck,
fell to hard.

Need to get up,
I wish I knew.

© 2012 Jimmy Seaman


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-.- I think it's the story of almost everyone's life right now. I mean, Nora's going through it, I was going through it, and my friends are going through it. My friend wrote something and I'll post it down below... I hope you feel better after you read it.:)

" You really are in control of the way you feel. I didn't believe it at first either. But I started to udnerstand that.. instead of drowing myself in what was wrong, I started looking at what was right. Don't look at the past.. it's already happened. Look at the present.. the future. This is your chance. Your one and only chance at life. Why ruin it?
There's honestly so much to live for. Sure, there are bumps in the road. Sure, things might be hard right now. And might get even harder. But why let that stop you? Why give up now? Cause a year from now, two years from now.. 5 years from now. You'll look back smiling, cause you will see how much you have overcome.
You're never alone. Everyoen is fighting their own battle.
Do more of what makes you happy!"

:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


A powerful poem. Left a lot of mystery and thoughts for the reader. " I wish I knew" is a statement we will think and say many times in a life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


*sigh* Story of my life right now. I know that I didn't do anything wrong but at times I think, "What did I do to deserve being sick like this? I have had to give up practically everything. Where did I go wrong?"

Great write! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Jimmy Seaman

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I'm 15, 5' 9' 5' 10" area for height, 203 lbs, love Led Zeppelin, B-day is August 26. I'm in 10'th grade. I love to swim. I am bi. I love the show Inu-Yasha. I respect peoples feelings. I hate it when.. more..

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