What i learnt to do

What i learnt to do

A Chapter by Sunflower

The most important thing i learned about the relationship
 with my mother and i is that when we argue, shut your mouth,
 let it go, its not even worth it. when ever me and my 
mom are arguing about some thing the best thing to do
 is shut your mouth and let her get her anger out and
 don't take anything seriously because my mom is 
always stressed so when we argue i let her express
 her feeling.I learnt to shut your mouth even if she 
is wrong because your just gonna get ion more trouble.
Don't question it. Just go with it.


© 2013 Sunflower


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Hey! So this was a good start, but I feel as though there was still a lot to elaborate. What do you fight about? How does it make you feel? Remember to really delve into your emotions in a way that utilizes various literary devices so that we can really empathize with you. In general, make this longer! Expound! :) It doesn't matter if the thought takes you 200 words or 20,000, just write it until there's nothing left to say.

I can definitely relate, so I'd love to see you take this further and really analyze it. If you have any questions, just feel free to ask! Keep writing, and best wishes. xxx

Posted 11 Years Ago



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