Mother knows best

Mother knows best

A Chapter by Sunflower

Mother is wise
Mother is kind
This is why she knows best
Mother is smart
Mother has heart
This is why mother knows best
She tells you he is dirt
She helps you when your hurt
She helps you with defining
She has the best timing 
Mother just know's best


© 2013 Sunflower


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I feel like you caught too much from Disney's Tangled that you didn't as much personal content. I'd appreciate it more if it was less of "Mother knows bests," and more as to why she knows. It feels like you're imitating a corny song and stamping on it with big red letters that it is your own.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sunflower

11 Years Ago

thank you!! i didnt know what to do on this one my teacher assigned me

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Added on May 9, 2013
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