Aggravated?

Aggravated?

A Poem by Heath Mindy

Sometimes you may feel aggravated?
Maybe you think it is something someone said or did, maybe it was...
Seems that everyone has there limitations, and it is a good idea to know your own,
Otherwise, you pick a bone, and fuzz!
Think of yourself as a tea kettle, those old fashioned kind, 
When they are ready ,they whistle, and you turn the burner off or down,
To unwind-
It is just as well to get that kettle before it starts to whistle, 
Probably a good idea, you know your limitations too-
So next time you get aggravated, your red flag goes up, 
Never mind about someone else, think about you!
Go unwind and rest, turn the burner down-
You cannot fix anyone else, but you could mess up 
Your own crown.
Know your limitations and don't get aggravated, It really is not the way, you want to be 
Belated.

© 2016 Heath Mindy


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I like it. Had me think about domestic violence. Just a couple things. The first line doesn't work as a question for me, maybe put 'sometimes we all feel aggravated, because it already reads as though the answer is yes. Plus i read the last word as remembered, i don't understand belated. Good job otherwise!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Heath Mindy

7 Years Ago

thanks! Appreciate the comment!

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Heath Mindy
Heath Mindy

Granite Falls, NC



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I have had an interesting journey of life. I have had many adventures and seasons to reflect on in my meditation discretionary times through out the day. I actually love people and love getting a ch.. more..

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