love

love

A Poem by akshay

Love is like iron. The surface can be rusted by time and trials. But the rub of a beloved can always reveal the core, pure and untouched by the moistness of sadness.

© 2016 akshay


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I love this! Very unique comparison as love to an iron, which makes this even cooler.
Keep Writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on July 1, 2016
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