Look Harder

Love and beauty are here, you just have look for them.

You see the world from my eyes,

But, you fail to realize why you see happiness

You see the same old house, the same broken street

Yet, you feel love, instead of the evil that had once overcame you

 

If you see the world as I do

The pain, the war, the evil will disappear

Love, beauty, and peace shall no longer be forgotten

How could you forget such great thoughts, when you see the world as I do?

 

Come. Look. Listen.

See the difference that shines in my eyes

It’s marvelous out there, absolutely amazing

So much to see, so much to do, so much that could happen

 

Change your view, fix your pain

Go out into the world and teach them,

Teach them to dare to change, dream to love, live for beauty,

Show others, What it is like when you see the world from my eyes.

Author's Note

please help with grammar!

Reviews

[Archia]

I thought this was very inspiring. It spoke wonderful words about how to see the world and seeing the good in life. And your grammar is fine really, I don't think you need to worry about it.

[Angel Criner]

The message; I absolutely love it.

[Mind Racer]

Thank You!

[luvingu01]

THNX FOR SUBMITTING.

I luv this poem. its raw, its livid and the emotions are overwhelming.
Speak Inspiration! Its power to those who doesn't know the power their pain bringing them to their knees overdraws them to uncover.

**Perfect Love cast away fear.**

[Mind Racer]

Thank You! Glad to know you liked it!

[Larq]

"Change your view, fix your pain
Go out into the world and teach them,
Teach them to dare to change, dream to love, live for beauty,
Show others, What it is like when you see the world from my eyes."

Proactive poetry! I don't know how old you are but these words seem to come from a young heart that has not been destroyed by the ugliness of the world. Your heart for love and beauty will surely inspire others to "see the world through your eyes!" Beautiful work.

[Mind Racer]

Thank you! This makes me so happy!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)....................

[Mind Racer]

Thank you so much! Reviews always fire me to continue writing, glad to know you liked it!

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).......................