New World

Just a small, quick thought that i needed to write down. Thought the world should read. (and possibly review, hint...hint...)

  I can never understand this world. At one point everything can be amazing and perfect. Everyone gets along, everyone refuses to fight. There there's this time, that nobody sees coming, the storm. Raging on, destroying as much as it can and it never seems to stop. Anger. Hate. Death. And sometimes people don't even know there's a storm raging just outside their door. They feel like they can't stop it, so they ignore it. They pretend they still live in that old world that was full of beauty. They can't bear to think of anything else, because they were the reason this new world was created.

Author's Note

I am terrible at grammar, tell me if you see anything!

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

They can't bear to think of anything else, because they were the reason this new world was created.

Lack of knowledge or ignorance is the cradle for so many issues, bad decesions, sins, Socrates said, you said, I am not listening or understanding, brain seems like having a resistance ring just like in antibiotic resistance to microbes, we will find a poet in this cafe to find a remedy to break that ring, really enjoyed

[Mind Racer]

Thank you!

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome

[Why Nori]

Then there's - third line. Anger, hate, death, and - fifth line.
Over all fun read.

[Mind Racer]

Thank You!