A new start

What am I?

A piece of garbage to you?

Am I just a another victim too?

No, you didn't need to stoop so low

I see you hung up on somebody that you used to know

You acted like I was your Aphrodite, your one and only

This melody, your seductive smile

Now I've been tried and on trial

Is this you?

Shaking, collapsing, falling

pain is all I need now

A journey, one step at a time, I vow

It's time to change

Let's start with the first stage

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I really like the approach.

Your writing style brings it all together very nicely.

[❀Subaru_Nyaa!
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I don't know.....I'm sad that I have to search the words I don't know.Anyway,this has something in it that I can relate,something that makes me angry towards myself,I can't find it though

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing poem, there's so much emotions in this beautiful piece. Nicely written.

Kaze~ :-)

[For Who I Am]

Thanks, Kaze!

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Aguilar]

Incredible I surely understood your poem. I can really connect with it great job

[For Who I Am]

Thanks! Totoro-Sama and everyone else who reviews!

[Totoro-Sama]

"No, you didn't need to stoop so low
I see you hung up on somebody that you used to know"

"You acted like I was your Aphrodite, your one and only
This melody, your seductive smile
Now I've been tried and on trial"

I love those lines.
I completely understand the feeling. :D
Lovely poem. :D