My Duty

It's hard looking for what's right

It's as sneaky and quiet as the night

Is it wrong to follow your true hearts desire?

The people, a mark of fire

Eyes wide open at the future

I need to know what's right, crucial

This light, so mysterious, yet beautiful

Is this world so brutal

because they couldn't follow their dreams?

I am different, I have my own light of beam

I will shape my future no matter how crucial

 

 

 

Reviews

[kitty cat]

beautiful peom, loved it, great job

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

This poem is beautifully written. I loved it.

Kaze~

[For Who I Am]

Thank you sooo much!

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your,very welcome. :-)

[Micheal Firth]

I love the innocent intrigue of this line:

"I need to know what's right, crucial
This light, so mysterious, yet beautiful
Is this world so brutal"

Makes me remember why I enjoy reading the work of others, I like syllable play a lot though, its kind of my thing. Check my stuff out if you're ever bored, you might really like it!

[For Who I Am]

Thanks! I'll check it out right now!

[Hope]

"The people, a mark of fire.." a very nice line ! It's a good poem :)