My Smirk

What happens when a bee loses it's stinger

What is the purpose for me to linger

I stare at my heart

I'm not that clever but I am smart

I know the angels want my time to stay

But I'm ready to go and stay away

I stare at the knife, eager to test

But first I take the time to take some rest

I give my mom a last kiss on her cheek

I gave her a kiss, so meek

I'm not afraid to die

I've heard some better things on the other side

The pain, like coldness

Nothing can stop this madness

My eyes, dimming

Let this end my living

A slow smirk spreads

I follow the slow beat tread

A final gasp allows me to stop

My head connects with a knock

I look down, eyes glassy

With a smirk, as classy

 

 

Reviews

[Hibiki]

Great poem
I have no idea how to describe what I feel, it's really cool

[For Who I Am]

Thanks Hibiki! It was for a competition. Apparantly I lost. But it's okay! Thanks again!

[Hibiki]

Aaw... Too bad
Hope u'll win next time! ;)

[For Who I Am]

Thanks! : )

[For Who I Am]

Thank you for reviewing! I put my best into it!

[Eli Jarman]

I like this a lot. Good poem on pain