Heaven's Charms

What' is this feeling that keeps me trembling?

I can't hold myself together, never assembling

What is this water that lowers itself from my eyes?

It makes my lips tremble but I hold it together and sigh

What is this pain that trembles me to the core?

I feel like quitting and entering Heaven's door

What is this ground that holds me like death?

I can't hold on much longer, afraid of the stopping of my breath

Who is this kind face that holds me in his arms?

He is my savior, from Heaven's charms

Reviews

[Hibiki]

"Who is this kind face that holds me in his arms?
He is my savior, from Heaven's charms"

Ah, I like it... I a bit confuse, but I know it full of emotion
Great job ^^"

[Forgotten14]

I love the emotion that is packed into this piece. And you don't put any literal emotion, physical emotion, and I think that's good. You're not being flat out with the emotion.
Lovely~

[yuki]

something tells me some thing wrong so I get the idea but absolutely great.