Darkness or Light

It hurts to be light or dark

It hurts, leaving a mark

I don't know what's right or wrong

It carries a tune, like a hypnotic song

What is the difference between dark and light

I give up, losing my fight

I can't help but fade away

I wish I was here and could stay

Is there still a light, somewhere in the darkness

I tremble with fear in this madness

I run into the abyss searching

Somewhere I see it, lurking

I smile, reaching out

Now I can see and never pout

It's beauty reaching out, embracing me

Now that I'm here, I can finally see

 

Reviews

[For Who I Am]

Thank you sooo much for everyone reviewing this poem! It really means a lot.

[FJ]

Love this poem - sounds like my feelings. You defiantly gave your words life in the end, "Now that I'm here, I can finally see." The rhyming fits this poem perfectly. Good job!!! Unlike my high school english teacher I will give out 100%

[SonOfPlunder]

Really nice piece! Excellent choice of words, good work