One today

One today

A Poem by Millzy86
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Written 2006 A reflection of events. note this is about miscarriage not abortion

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Are you above me? 
Watching down upon my life 
My little guardian angel 
Yours was taken too soon 
I’m sorry for the wrong I did 
I never gave you the chance 
  
You never got to see the sunrise 
Never got to take your first steps 
I never got to see my baby’s eyes 
Your freedom was kept 
  
A lifetime of regret I shall live 
For never holding you in my arms 
A lifetime of blaming myself 
For doing so much harm 
  
Although you are gone 
I will never forget about you 
My little baby boy 
Just remember 

Mummy will always love you 

© 2015 Millzy86


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To capture strong emotions in words is what all good writers aspire to do and you have done that with this poem. The remorse your poems delivers comes through strong enough to draw tears and sympathy from all who read this. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is sorrowful... it may be incident or accident, your words can see how much you love the unborn soul. :(

Sure you are still a great mother. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


To capture strong emotions in words is what all good writers aspire to do and you have done that with this poem. The remorse your poems delivers comes through strong enough to draw tears and sympathy from all who read this. Thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Millzy86
Millzy86

New Zealand



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I am just a normal person but I use poetry to express the things I can't say. Still very much an amateur but I just wrote what comes. I'm open to criticism as it helps refine the hand. more..

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