You know it's good when you read something and it instantly takes you to a place which it describes. So many amazing memories flooded my head reading this. Love it!
Very nice and a bit of a surprise, I have been binge reading your poetry this morning and enjoying your dark side then came upon this spark of passion and it almost set my keyboard on fire Ha! Ha! But I have been wondering if in the last line of the first stanza it should be awakening? Either way it was a pleasure reading so thank you again :~)
Amazing use of description. You walk a gentle line of erotic to create good place and make the reader use their imagination. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
I am just a normal person but I use poetry to express the things I can't say.
Still very much an amateur but I just wrote what comes.
I'm open to criticism as it helps refine the hand.
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