kindled passion

kindled passion

A Poem by Millzy86
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written 2014

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Skin on skin 
Hands running wild 
Lips connected 
Awaken the inner child 

Passion ignites 
My soul exposed 
you Set my body on fire 
As your depth explodes 

Wrapped up in your warmth 
Euphoria runs free 
Our bodies as one 
How it's supposed to be 

© 2015 Millzy86


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You know it's good when you read something and it instantly takes you to a place which it describes. So many amazing memories flooded my head reading this. Love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Just like the last, I love how you word everything! Great read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very nice and a bit of a surprise, I have been binge reading your poetry this morning and enjoying your dark side then came upon this spark of passion and it almost set my keyboard on fire Ha! Ha! But I have been wondering if in the last line of the first stanza it should be awakening? Either way it was a pleasure reading so thank you again :~)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing use of description. You walk a gentle line of erotic to create good place and make the reader use their imagination. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Millzy86
Millzy86

New Zealand



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