Those Days Forgotten

Once, the whole of writerscafe lost their poetry. I lost everything i'd written except this one.

Those Day Forgotten

by:Arly Parent

 

Those days forgotten

That we long to know

Those days

the parts of us that show

 

our hearts

our souls

what we once were

what he had put together

thats unraveled

la coeur

 

Times past

But never lost

Reached for

At whatever cost

 

Never caught

And never bought

Always fleeting

Yet always sought

 

Not the same

And never will be

Should we all lose hope

At what we can evidently see?

 

Was I better than?

A better me?

 

Who am I?

What can I see?

 

Is this truth

Or a warped image in my sights?

 

Should I even make this comparison?

Will it even help?

 

The answer lies

Somewhere deep

Somewhere

Maybe...where things creep

in the recesses of the mind or the valleys of the sky

Some place i'll never know nor find

'Til the day I die

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Arly Parent

 

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

Is this truth or a warped image in my sights? Very good imagery and detail!! Great write!!!

[Jeremiah Medina]

This has a nice flow and lots to analyze. Thats always a good sign. Keeps the reader thinking. Very interesting. Nice write.

[E. M. Murren]

This is a deeply felt work. Truly well expressed. I like this a lot. Cheers.

[Doug]

this is a good compilation of thoughts. keep going!

-doug-

[Silent Serenity]

wow... that was really good.. like i don't even know what to say
i'm speechless!
i think you're a way better writer than me! good job! =]