Choked (Work in Progress)

I am

the fire amongst flowers

the fan amongst flames

the pillbug in the heather

And the cry of horses going lame

I am the mewling of babes

whooping cough's rough touch

the sound of mental anguish

and a girl's failed blush.

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

I have to tell you I like the girls failed blush line
it could be that she wanted to but couldn't or was it a fake blush
leaves me wondering reread it just now I like this piece really do
like the comparisons you have used
thank you for choking*)