Goodbyes.

another one i wrote a while back...

As the moon trips over the crystal night, we see our future's shimmering bright.

Will we be together or torn apart? will you still be the one holding my heart?
The world's a stage, and I've played my part but who will be nursing a broken heart?

 The years roll by, one by one soon everyone else will all be gone.
The tears come rolling down my cheek as it feels as if I'm on a losing streak.
So now I close my eyes and say goodbye.
I still don't want you to see me cry.
My heart feels empty, there's a cloud overhead and still it's thoughts of you that are filling my head...

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"I still don't want you to see me cry.
My heart feels empty, there's a cloud overhead and still it's thoughts of you that are filling my head..."

A sad write. I like those lines the most...:)

[PoetryXpressions]

Nice start...looking forward to the completion....can tell it will be something worth reading.