You're Home

You're Home

A Poem by Michelle Aldus
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Just something a wrote

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You're Home
We race to meet you
Sliding on the worn wooden floor
Holding on tight until you gasp
We hold you, hoping you're real
You've been gone forever
A day, a week, half a year
It all feels the same

You're Home
We want to tell you everything
All that happened in your absence
You change your clothes
And shed the uniform that means so much
You still belong to us, but they come first

You're Home
The eldest goes first
She has important things to say
A boy, a class, perhaps college
Next the middle,
all fancy and stresses
A fight, a new teacher, more detention
The last and youngest 
Full of laughter and half finished jokes
Her words all try to get out at once
We laugh together till we have tears

You're Home
Everything is better, we are safe
You left so long ago and
In your absence we panicked
We went to school, we played our games
In the summer we read our books
Talking over the phone, and checking in
Never enough, we wanted you here.

You're Home
And finally you are ours at last
We didn't begrudge you your life apart
We followed as children often do
But now we are the ones who must leave
One by one we will go out
A day, a week, half a year
Will go by just the same

Holidays will come and go
and some together and others apart
Let it not be when you go home forever
that we all come back again.

© 2013 Michelle Aldus


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Michelle Aldus
Rough Draft, Free Writing, Personal

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I liked the line
"We hold you, hoping you're real"

also the description of how the children talked

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Michelle Aldus
Michelle Aldus

Bordentown, NJ



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My name is Michelle, I'm 22, and I've only been published once in a military base paper. I really love to write, but often my stories seem to fade away before the ending, or I have the ending in mind .. more..

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