To Thee

love poem

  I heard Your footsteps in here.
  I lost all feeling.

  Living in the past ( is) not the Bright-est way of living.
   I do not care any more.

   Alive (outside)  death (in heart)

   It is all the same now.

   Do not wake me up.

   I need my dream.

Author's Note

What ever You say,please,say it gently.Thank You for all Your thoughts.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

well I liked it. I especially liked living in the past is not the brightest way...etc. I think it misses something tho' I am not sure what