a short verse

 life's tincture bleeds and bleeds away,

rose petals slowly rust.

Drab offices all built in grey,

amidst the bones and dust.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like it a lot.

[Gheeneil]

To me this speaks about extinction which eventually leads to gradual death. I like the depth of this piece.

[Adelia Alighieri]

Beautifully explained in such simple words.
Standing 'O' m/

[hotfire]

AWW SO SWEET I LOVE ROSE

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I love , short verse, this kind that says alot without having to meander.

[nostal]

Nice rhyme, doesn't feel forced,
and such a profound piece,
even though short.

[LeeLee Ryder]

ASV paints a somewhat bleak picture of life.
It's brief but powerful which parallels how life
can sometimes be. Haunting..
LLR

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like this very much... its short , but amazing

[Raven Radke]

that was a very well written
in such a small verse
it explains so much

[deeps]

This is wonderful
Short and straight to the point
Amazing write.