Sexy

sex·y [séksee]
(comparative sex·i·er, superlative sex·i·est)
adj
1.  arousing desire: arousing or intended to arouse sexual desire 
2.  aroused: sexually aroused 
3.  appealing: appealing especially because of being new, interesting, or trendy (informal) 

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Sexy

 

Arousing my desire, even though your not here

Appealing my affection, with a whisper in my ear

Informally inviting, by the suggestion you propose

Anxiously awaiting, this position to hold

 

Enticing my arousal, by a simple touch

Into your body, you feel a thrust

As your climax is reached, all things left behind

I just wish it was real and not in my mind.

 

 

Reviews

[LilyGrace]

I like your use of language at the beginning of every line;
'Arousing my desire', 'Enticing my arousal', 'Appealing my affection'.. all these combinations of words work very nicely together.
I have to say that I disagree with Annalisa - I think you stay in the same tense throughout personally; 'you feel', 'all things [are] left behind', 'as your climax in reached'...
Anyway... good use of language and I love the way you open with the definition, to echo Annalisa, a nice touch indeed.
Good write!
LGD

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like how you used a dictionary reference, all in all i like the whole thing... really good write..... btw, i like your bio, its so true & hilarious

[X]

i like how it's about sex but not in a trashy, s**t fest way.
i wrote a piece on the same topic but it turned out a bit different.
nicely done. =]

keep up the good work.

[Annalisa]

I enjoyed this. It was simple and hot. Though I do have one suggestion. In the first stanza you use the first tense, then in the second you switch to second. Stay in first, the second tense confused me a bit. But other than that this was amazing. I especially loved how you included the definition with the poem... It added a nice touch to the poem.

[flaneur]

Does visualizing this mean I'm peeping through your windows? Your definition is an improvement over the dictionary...

[Fran Marie]

OoooooooH LaLa Michael~ you wrote a nice sexy and steamy piece here~ well expressed and nicely penned~Fran Marie

[Vatsayayana]

Ohhhhhhhh........... ~shudders~
Your words just flood the senses. I'm licking my lips in anticipation, squirming in my chair, biting my lip and moaning ohhhh so softly under my breath. What a fantasy, what a daydream.
The frustration of knowing your lover isn't there and yet FEELING them. Sensing them.
You remember what their skin tastes like, feels like under your fingerprints.
The way their ohhhhhh so unique taste floods across your tongue.
You lave, you nip, you sip up their desire while your own is just spilling, crashing, sliding forth.
Scrumptious. Ohhhhh you've enticed me here.
Left me begging for more.
Brava!