I need you Lord

Softly at night I call out your name.

Do you hear my cry?

With all of my heart I give you the praise.

Do not pass me by.

In the midst of my despair,

Will you set me free?

I know I’ve fallen from your grace.

Please come and rescue me.

 

I need you Lord.

Oh I need you Lord.

To guide me along the way.

I need you Lord.

Yes I need you Lord.

Please help me today.

 

As I walk along the trodden path.

I stumble my way through.

Help me Lord stay on my feet,

So I can come to you.

You have always been right there.

I know that you are true.

I need a touch from the Masters hand,

That only comes from you.

I need you Lord.

Oh I need you Lord.

To guide me along the way.

I need you Lord.

Yes I need you Lord.

Please help me today.

Reviews

[robin]

It would flow better to say "Please help me out today" in keeping with the pace. The rest is a great example of how simple our speech can be with Him, and how we need not have any special status to be humbled by His atonement. Beautiful. It's also interesting that in one part you ask Him to come to you, and in the other it's so you can come to Him: this is the part that tells us about you, the writer. Great sharing.

[IMOGEAN]

Yes, we all need Jesus. I honor you for writing this. It is beautiful.

God Bless
Imogean~

[shadadakiya]

now that was awesome very beautiful and from the heart those are are always the best ones god bless you and you sweet family too

[BLFK]

I need Him everyday too. Thank you for sharing this.
It's true and very easily forgotten. But we need Him.
All the time, everyday, always... We need Him, and your poem shows your passion for Him.
That's inspiring.
BLFK

[SoHopeful]

That really makes me think...about how people need to bring god into their lives for a change for the better. You really just inspired me so thank you so much.