Acid tear drops

very very old

Dont you see the acid tear drops

coming from my eyes

Dont you see them falling

falling on my heart

Dont you see them burn

burning up my heart

Why didnt you see the acid tear drops

coming from my eyes

why didnt you see them falling

falling onto my heart

why didnt you see them burning

burning up my heart

Why didnt you stop me

crying from the start

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I really like this... I like that you used your tears as acid great comparision... this is really a great poem, i like the repetition that you have in this and your emotions are well expressed in it... Great job!