In This Kiss.

Just a small poem on the beginnings on love, and taking that chance.

Defences high and spirits low
From all the hurt you've come to know
Unsure whether to stay or go
My offer there, my heart on show

Two tears trip over tired walls
Your mind pursues forgotten halls
The yearning in your heart, it calls
And slowly, your guard, crumbles, falls

With trembling hands you're well aware
What fleeting, small hope brought you here
Promise yourself to be sincere
We're lost inside a dream we share

Searching for doubt, but finding none
No pleading urge to turn and run
And finally this love has won
We came as two and left as one

Who knows in this what we will start
But in this kiss, I found your heart.

Author's Note

Any feedback would be really great! Thanks :D

Reviews

[RainC]

If I could, I would copy and paste the entire poem to point out my favorite lines! lol
Truly a gorgeous read for me! You never know when to take a chance on love but the journey is mysteriously beautiful...............just like this ink!
I love it!
*I want more please.....* :)

[miji]

Hehe thank you so much! :) Just getting back into my writing after a loooong break, so hopefully heaps more to come :)

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written. Love the flow, the excitement and optimism. Great write.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way the poem fell together. Some fear and then some hope. Then a very good ending. No weakness in the poem. Just a outstanding poem of love.
Coyote