Tragedy of the Timid

Another Romantic Poem, set in first person.

I had a dream

And it seemed

that we were three

Me, you and we

Walked along

Upon ancient Beach

The stars so far

We could never reach

Though parting did

And ways we took

Alone both now

For we never looked

Reviews

[sette]

I LIKE THE USE OF THE ANCIENT BEACH AND THE I PERSON TRANSCENDING INTO WE, A ROMANTIC POEM FOR THE YOUNG BUT STILL IT CAPTURED MY ATTENTION.