Into Darkness

A simple few lines I made, not too much too look into, but in my humble opinion, a good poem nonetheless.

Perhaps you and I

Nearly free

Flightless and Flighty

Could escape reality

Fly away into twilight

Where none could see

Waltz through the night

So nearly free

Reviews

[Deactivated]

Completely relatable. We find our comfort in the darkness, but eventually, we're sucked back into the light.

[aspen]

this is short and sweet, i love it. I love the use of being nearly free from reality, i connect with the theme.