Love Letter - March 3 2015

After reading Arcadia, by Tom Stoppard.

To my one, my love:

Everything is connecting like the breath of studious teenagers with the air, and the neurons that we transit to illumination... The world is turning, time is passing, things are changing. But sex, and love, and literature seem to ever last; facts are lost, and rediscovered, but the inspiration knowledge provides will never cease to exist - it will never be altered. 

& furthermore I will never lose light of my Aphrodite, my one, my love... I can account for the attraction which Newton left out. He surely must have - there is no earthly way that I feel for you, it is all up in the cosmos, in the infinite, ever mysterious reaches of the universe, beyond the rice puddings of Milky Ways and Andromedas, I love you... And again, these words will never die - 

I will bring you to climax, and then on to immortality... 

Love,

              Yours 

                

Author's Note

an unsent letter to an extinguished flame

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing letter. A lot said in the words.
"- there is no earthly way that I feel for you, it is all up in the cosmos, in the infinite, ever mysterious reaches of the universe, beyond the rice puddings of Milky Ways and Andromedas, I love you... And again, these words will never die -"
I like the way you explained things. Good description easy to understand. Thank you for sharing the excellent letter and words.
Coyote

[Jordan]

Thank you, appreciate the review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Poetic Nuance]

Dude that was terrific. A pity that you chose to leave it undelivered to its true recipient. No matter what the answer was, this note deserved to be delivered. Maybe it still can... Wot say Chief? :)

[Brittany Zedalis]

Wow. I can't even come up with anything clever to say; this left me speechless. Beautiful words, beautiful work.

[Jordan]

Gratitude :)

[DJ]

Beautifully written,perhaps you should have sent it.
If she doesn't get it,she never would in my opinion.

[Jordan]

Thank you, DJ

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

A man of science and spirituality? - An intelligent piece - I have a personal pet hate for "and" following commas other than that another beautifully well written prose - ATC

[Jordan]

Thanks for the criticsm - I'll think of that when I turn in my next essay.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

You're a student?

[Jordan]

Yep, a senior in high school!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

You should write a piece on what American high school is really like we have so many TV shows over here ha

[Jordan]

I'll write that down, and let you know when I do :)

[Lotus Flower]

This was really touching Jordan, the fact that there are people still writing letter shows that there is still hope after all with the romantic notions! I love how you speak of her in such a high place and high level of adoration. I enjoyed this particular one alot!

[Jordan]

glad you enjoyed, I do fancy romantic expressions :)

[giovannym]

I really enjoyed this, I was pleasantly surprised by " I can account for the attraction which Newton left out." thank you for sharing, it was refreshing, loved it.

[Jordan]

thank you!

[Brummy59]

This was awesome man! The way you described it all was captivating. Maybe check some of my stuff out and give your thoughts? It would be much appreciated.

[Jordan]

thanks, i'll be sure to do so soon.

[Gummy.G]

It's such a strong twist to what I thought would be a love letter.. Great job

[Jordan]

Thank you,

[Cindy Marietta]

This was really cool, writing that would hit deep to whoever you gave it to but still holds an impact on anyone who reads it. " I can account for the attraction which Newton left out. He surely must have" Great line

[Jordan]

Gratitude. I think it would also help to read the play, if you're that interested :)