Random Poem

She creeps inside from nowhere,

And brings in her hand, some sweet pain,

She hops, dances and moves around,

I run behind to snatch her,but in vain.

She is there, she is not there, no where,

And before I know, she disappears,

I do not know,  where she comes from,

Her presence perturbs, her absence bothers.

Now this is a random poem written in a jiffy,

For a random feeling, that comes in an iffy.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

Thank you for this poem! The first couple of lines really helped, since I kind of forgot the idea I was going to write about, and your poem reminded me of it.

There are some typos with the spaces, but other than that, I really liked it. The rhyming is good, and I found the last two lines funny in a good way, and they reminded me of Dr. Suess.