Day and Night

A poem I wrote at midnight when I was eight :)

The waves crash upon the shore

Hear the oceans mighty roar

The shells lay small upon the sand

Two people standing hand in hand

The sun beams a golden light

Until the moon brings back the night

 

The waves crash upon the shore

Hear the oceans mighty roar

The sky hung like a blacked sheet

While the stars meet and greet

The moon shines a slivery grey

Until the sun brings back the day.

Author's Note

What you think?

Reviews

[for my ♥]

I think this is amazing. Such a lovely write

[An owl on the moon]

Saw your note about when you wrote this! It is a lifting glimpse of day and night.. darkness and light.. peace and turbulence.. all singing over us. Beautiful!

[Stormy Weather]

You wrote this when you were eight? Damn. Nice job :D

[Sakib]

you have done good bringing up the contrast and relation between day an night. and it was when you were eight years old. so, it's commendable

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I love your youthful poem! I love the poems that I wrote as a child, too, because they are so filled with an innocent view of the world. Thanks for sharing this timeless gem!!