Something.

Something.

A Poem by Leah Natalie
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Another little scribble :)

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Have you ever felt like running away?

Not because there’s something to run from, but someplace else to be?

Something else to do?

Something else to wish?

Something else to dream?

Something more?

Something less?

Something.

© 2011 Leah Natalie


Author's Note

Leah Natalie
What does it remind you of?
What do you think? :)

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This piece, like poetry should, makes you stop.
It makes you think.
It makes you feel the emotions of what your mind comes to think of...
As you're thinking, you're answering.

And that's what poetry should make you do: ponder.

I really loved this. I really loved how much I connected to it: simple.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Not sure really how to feel but to sit and ponder.
Very nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


you always have to be running ,never stuck to one place..keep all options open
you should always hop from a place to another,al;ways wishing,dreams,lots of them
and think of more to come and see ,never settle for less than a whole mess
something beautiful will reveal to you in the end,and open your eyes to things new
new and you could only see ..because you always dream
lovely write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Longing to travel? Hoping to be somewhere else? or you feel like your born in the wrong decade? Suppose thats what it reminds me of

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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