It isnt me

all my poems are personal ones it helps me clear my head

Hidden behind this smile of mine,

is a very broken heart,

Hidden behind this laugh of mine,

im mentally falling apart,

look very closely at me,

and you will see,

the girl your looking at,

isn't really me

Author's Note

all my poems are personal for me when I write it helps me clear my head

Reviews

[Shineheemi]

Bravo! Short but meaningful

[Sira YR]

Well I hope that everything is going alright with you. Great use of rhyme as it definitely added a nice flow to the piece. The piece kind of reminded me of the song 'Smiling faces'. Also on an aesthetic note, i liked the font color choice as well as it fit the mood of the poem nicely.


Great work and I am looking forward to reading more soon :)

YR.

[John the Baptist]

This work shows that surface appearances don't tell the whole story. Many hide their pain behind smiles, fearful of burdening others. Often medication and therapy are needed. They can help.