I Promise...

“It’s not fair…” I couldn’t hold it back anymore. My heart clenched up and tears fell from my eyes. My hands gripped tightly to his shirt, and my head dug into his chest. I felt so stupid. I never was like this. I never let people see me like this. See me so weak, but with him my emotions always were on my sleeve for him to see. Even when I try to hide them, he can always tell. I’m such a cry baby…

“I know…” He whispered into my ear letting me know that he agreed with me. That he thought it was also unfair and not right.

“There’re people that aren’t even in love, and they get to see each other every day…” I cried into his chest. I could feel my eyes get red from the tears. “We are in love…and-” I struggled to say the words so he said them for me.

“And we don’t get to see each other as much as we would like.” He finished my sentence. I nodded my head that was pushed against his chest, agreeing with every word that he had said.

I bit my lip, pushed my tearstained face away from his chest, and looked up at him with fresh tears forming. “But still- I still love you with-”

“All of my heart.” He told me with a soft smile. My bottom lip quivered, and the fresh tears fell streaming down my face.

I pushed my head back into his chest, and only could manage to mumble “Mmmhm.” I already missed him so much that it was killing me, and yet I was still in his arms. He hadn’t even left yet.

“I always will.” He promised me, while his arms held me tight.

“Forever.”

“And longer… I promise.”  

Author's Note

IDK short story and it's not ture.. hm. hope you like it =)

Reviews

[Jewel Ailiyah-Celeste L..]

All I'm going to say is that you have to write a romance novel, whether true or not...You did great and expressed the love and emotion wonderfully. Although I haven't been in the EXACT situation, I still think that you did perfectly and I believe in it. I felt that I was in the spot of the character and I felt the exact same things.

Are you sure that you haven't been in these situations as you have written in this and other works?

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

What Amy L says is true we never see each other we have been going out for more than 6 months now and we have seen each other about 4 times. the emotin of this small but effective pice is... is... AMAZING!!! are you sure you have never experianced it? it is so real. Amazing

[Amy]

omg this describes the way it is with my boyfriend and me we almost never see each other this realy hit me great, wonderful i love it

[snapstache]

I love it! You're great at describinh things and i felt i was ther. I love things about love and how they cant see each other very often. There's always tradgey. Your book expressed feelings even if it wasn't true. Great story! *.*